Blog 14

A major goal for my revision is to beef up my analysis while keeping my word count low.  I need to ultimately be efficient with my word choice while connecting and describing my ideas well. Another goal is to add more to my conclusion. I seemed to fizzle out when writing and slacked on the conclusion. Adding more to wrap up the overall paper will help strengthen it. First I will reread my paper. I will cut out any unnecessary words or sentences that are duplicate. I will combine sentences to make them stronger and have a bigger meaning. Next, I will review what I want to say and articulate a powerful analysis of my quotes. With my conclusion, I plan to write three separate conclusions and combine them into a solid one.  This will allow for all my ideas to be wrapped up in a non repetitive way. The biggest challenge that I see is the conclusion. This will take time and effort to construct. I will need to specifically pin point what I want to say and say it.  I will need to connect each idea and say why it is important. If a challenge arises that is to difficult, I will look to my peers. I plan to reach out and discuss what I have so far and how I can make it better. I feel like having a different point of view on my paper will help me a lot.